Sunday, July 11, 2010

My Narrative

Grand Opening

“OMG” Sarah, Rose and Kate screamed with great excitement. They got ready as quickly as possible, when they were ready they ran out the door one after the other, the first thing they saw was a humongous balloon that read ‘Grand Opening’.
Well I guess your wondering what’s going on, the town is having a huge grand opening for the first theme park. No-one could believe that today was the day we have been waiting for.
Gates open at 11:00am and in half an hour the place was packed, Rose wanted to go on the Slippery Dip but Sarah and Kate were too scared so Sarah went on the thriller and Kate went on the spider.
All of a sudden the rides just stopped, the worse bit was they were on the top, Sarah was okay to start off and so was Rose but Kate was totally freaking out.
Luckily the spider ride had an escape button that got Kate parachuted safely to the ground. But that wasn't the case for Sarah and Rose. It took roughly two hours before the rides drifted to the ground.
Sarah, Kate and Rose met at the entrance. They had decided they’d had enough excitement for one day!
But that hasn't stopped them from going back.

1 comment:

  1. Omg Jess!! this was so FANTASTIC. well i still haven't finished my im on padge 17 :D

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